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The most positive person that I had met is my classmate Xiao Tian.One day，in art class，Xiao Tian was making a painting when one of the boys were running around with a paintbrush.All of sudden，the boy accidentally drew a line of brown paint in Xiao Tian's painting as he was running past.Instead of get angry she simply smiled but forgave that boy.After that，Xiao Tian who started painting around that brown line，and she turned it into a beautiful tree branch in his picture.Xiao Tian always thinks about the positive side of thing no matter how badly they seem.Her optimism and big，bright smile make her a role model by everyone.
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