Liu Feng　Blog　My 18th Birthday　2010-4-14　9：29 p．m．
    Today is my 18th birthday，which means that from now on，I am an adult，so it is very fresh to me．I can not forget the happiness and love that my family and friends have given me．To show their love and affection，they held a great ceremony for me at home，and also sent me many kinds of presents，which have left me with great memories．
    However，the most unforgettable thing is：a small gift from my English teacher，Jesse．
    This morning，after class，Jesse approached me and said "Happy Birthday and here is a card for you．"After thanking him，I carefully opened it：
    "Dear Liu Feng，
    I sincerely hope the 18th birthday will bring you great happiness all through your life．I have been with you for almost one year，and I find you are a good boy．You are working hard and doing fine in your study，and also I'd like you to have a little change in yourself．Since last month，when you failed in the exam，you have become shy and passive，you seem to have closed your world from others and hesitate to be together with them，which I think is not good for you．To adapt yourself to your future college and social life，find yourself an active life!
Yours，
JesseReading this，I was moved to tears…
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