假如你是李華，覺(jué)得自己的英文寫(xiě)作能力急需提高。你的美國(guó)筆友Carl 是中學(xué)生寫(xiě)作比賽一等獎(jiǎng)得主，請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)封信，向他求助。要點(diǎn)如下：
1.請(qǐng)教寫(xiě)作技巧（如組織文章結(jié)構(gòu)，選擇要點(diǎn)等）；
2.請(qǐng)他指導(dǎo)并修改自己的作文；
3.表示感謝。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
1.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Carl，
How is everything going？
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Looking forward to your early reply.
Your faithfully，
Li hua

【考點(diǎn)】提綱作文．

【答案】Dear Carl，
How is everything going？What I am in desperate need of is to improve my writing ability.Since you are the first prize winner of the middle school student writing competition，I think you are the very person who can do me this favor.
I want you to give me some advice about how to improve my writing skills，such as organizing the structure of the article，selecting key points，etc.Besides，I have written a composition，would you  revise my composition in terms of fluency and accuracy of language use.
It would be highly appreciated if you could give me any suggestions on my writing.Thanks in advance.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Your faithfully，
Li Hua