閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。
Old Jim was without doubt the best hair stylist I'd ever known.He designed every haircut so artistically that it would be an understatement(低估)to say the magics created by him were "beautiful".But there was one strange thing about his shop:there was no mirror in it,so customers were kept in suspense (懸念)until they reached home.
I entered Old Jim's hairdresser's,sad and disappointed,having just been rejected a role in the school play.I was ordinary-looking and boring,and that's why they didn't want me — I was convinced. "I want to be beautiful," I said to Old Jim,tears almost dropping.After having a haircut,I thanked him again and walked out through the door,his words remaining in my head: "There's magic in your new hair.Now start your journey to beauty."
Sunlight dropped down through the overlapping leaves above my head as I walked on the street.I shook my head but didn't feel a difference.I could only slightly feel that something was different,like a little voice that had long been suppressed(抑制)that desired to be heard.
Suddenly,I heard someone calling out to me. "Susan!Susan" I turned around.It was Jennifer,the most popular girl in the whole school. "It really is you,Susan.You look great today!" "Thanks." Jennifer was everything I wanted to be.What a sweet victory to get such admiration from a girl like her!We had a conversation on school and parted at a crossing,where she turned left and I right.
As I walked,I could see a boy walking toward me.We went to the same school but hadn't talked to each other much.If it weren't for the new hair,I would have looked down and pretended not to see him.I had always been shy.
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But at that point,I intended to test out Old Jim's magic.
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At the sight of home,I started to go faster,desperate to see my new hair in the mirror in my room.
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I grew up in a poor family with six brothers,three sisters,my father and mother.We had little money and few goods,but plenty of love and attention.I was happy and energetic.I understood that no matter how poor a person was,he could still afford a dream.
My dream was athletics.By the time I was sixteen,I could throw a ninety-mile-per-hour fastball and hit anything moving on the football field.And I was so lucky that my high-school coach was Ollie Jarvis,who not only believed in me,but often told me "Dream is priceless".However,when I was about to get off the ground,one particular incident happened,which almost ruined my long-held dream.
It was the summer holiday in senior two and a friend recommended me for a summer job.I was offered ﹩12.25 per hour.Compared with the average ﹩3.5,that was a big sum.I was so excited,because this meant a chance for money in my pocket,certainly money for a new bike and new clothes,and the start of savings for a house for my mojye.air.The prospect(前景)of the job was inviting,and I wanted to jump at the opportunity.
Then I realized I would have to give up summer baseball training to handle the work schedule.I didn't dare to tell my coach,I thought of the advice my mother often gave me when I lacked courage, "If you make your bed,you have to lie in it. "I decided to talk to my coach in person.After all,my dream of buying my mom a house and having money in my pocket was worth facing his disappointment to me.
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2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
I gathered my courage and knocked at his door.________
That question reminded me of what my coach used to say.________發(fā)布:2025/1/1 18:0:1組卷:2引用:2難度:0.4 -
2.Jenny was the only child in her home.She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily.
She couldn't help weeping sorrowfully when she thought of the scolding from her mother.Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours,she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat,but it was not even possible for her,since she had nothing with her.She stood beside a stand for a while,watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business.However,with no money in hand,she sighed and had to leave.
The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked, "Hey,girl,you want to have the noodles?
"Oh,yes…,but I don't have money on me…" she replied.
"That's nothing.I'll treat you today," said the man. "Come in."
The seller brought her a bowl of noodles,whose smell was so attractive.
As she was eating,Jenny cried silently.
"What is it?" asked the man kindly.
"Nothing,actually I was just touched by your kindness!" said Jenny as she wiped her tears. "Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles,while my mother,drove me out of the house.She showed no care for me.She is so merciless compared to a stranger!!"
Hearing the words,the seller smiled, "Girl,do you really think so?I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot.But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby.Can you number the times she cooked for you?Have you expressed your gratitude to her?"
Jenny sat there,speechless and numb with shock?she remembered Mother's familiar face and weathered hands. "Why did I not think of that?A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel indebted,but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me."
On the way home,Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.
注意:
1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;
2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Approaching,the doorway,Jenny took a deep breath.__________.
A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.__________.發(fā)布:2025/1/1 18:0:1組卷:7引用:6難度:0.2 -
3. One day,when I was a first-year student in high school,I saw a kid from my class walking home from school.His name was Kris.It looked like he was carrying all of his books.I thought to myself,"Why would anyone bring home all his books on a Friday?He must really be a nerd(書呆子)."
I had quite a weekend planned(parties and a football game with my friends),so I shrugged my shoulders and went on.As I was walking,I saw a gang of kids running toward him.They ran at him,knocking all his books out of arms and tripping him so he landed in the dirt.His glasses went flying,and I saw them land in the grass about ten feet from him.He looked up,and I saw terrible sadness in his eyes.
My heart went out to him.So I jogged over to him,and as he crawled around looking for his glasses,I saw tears in his eyes.As I handed him his glasses,I said,"They are bad guys!They really should be punished."He looked at me and said,"Hey,thanks!"There was a big smile on his face.It was one of those smiles that showed real gratitude.
I helped him pick up his books and asked him where he lived.As it turned out,he lived near me,so I asked him why I had never seen him before.He said he had gone to a private school before.I would have never hung out with a private school kid before,but we talked all the way home,and I carried his books.
注意:
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He turned out to be a pretty cool kid.________
We always hung out on weekends,and the more I got to know Kris,the more I liked him._______發(fā)布:2025/1/1 18:0:1組卷:2引用:2難度:0.5
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