假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
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修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
I was born as a poor boy and grew up in the streets without the care，guidance and supervision of your beloved parents．I have been experienced an empty stomach，be almost frozen．And I have also existed without secure shelter and proper education．As a young man，with some sadly experiences of life，I start to dream for my future．I want to become a great man who have power and authority，like Abraham Lincoln，Benjamin Franklin，Martin Luther King，Ralph Waldo Emerson，Winston Churchill and so on．Yes，I dream to become such great man because I want to change and improved my beloved country，when people in need can live a happy and peaceful life．
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